the maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
The maps illustrate
two floor
plans of one trade conference held between 2009 to 2010. Add a hyphen
two-floor
Overall
, it is clear that
the changes of one trade conference held to reducing seats and adding balcony with lougue
Correct your spelling
lounge
league
area
.
Moving for more details, the meeting room moved to concert
hall. Add an article
the concert
a concert
Likewise
, the exhibition area
had changed to stage
and registration Correct article usage
a stage
area
. By the same token, the main entrance and side entrance had similar position
during the period.
Regarding Fix the agreement mistake
positions
to
the floor plans in 2010, there Remove the preposition
apply
are
several movements of the trade conference held. Wrong verb form
were
Moreover
, the refreshment place place had changed by registration. Similarly
, the exhibition area
was moved from concert
Correct article usage
the concert
and
stage.Change preposition
to and
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