The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows
previous
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the previous
years
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years'
year's
population
and estimated
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an estimated
the estimated
population
in the future from different destinations.
Overall
, the number of
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apply
population
has been increasing since 1993 of
all regions Change preposition
in
whereas
United
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the United
states
is the country which shows Capitalize word
States
highest
figure Change the article
the highest
while
the lowest number and lowest growth rate is
calculated in New Correct subject-verb agreement
are
zealand
from 1993 to 2020 Change the capitalization
Zealand
andalso
the projected Correct your spelling
and also
population
.
United
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The United
states
recorded 249.9m of people in 1993 Capitalize word
States
and
which significantly increased to 320.6 in 2020. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, which
might be estimated to Correct pronoun usage
it
349
m in 2050. Add a missing verb
be 349
Secondly
, Canada is the second largest population
recorded as shown as
in the table which shows 26.6m of human beings at the Change preposition
apply
begining
which Correct your spelling
beginning
also
escalated into
36.9m in 2020. Change preposition
to
And
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Also
also
, it is estimated that 39m in 2050. Australia shows third
highest Correct article usage
the third
population
whereas
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apply
it
recorded Correct pronoun usage
apply
17.1
m and continued to grow and reached Change preposition
at 17.1
to
22.7m in 2020 and Change preposition
apply
projected
26m in 2050 followed by New Add a missing verb
is projected
zealand
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Zealand
whereas
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with
lowest
number of people recorded and growth rate that were 3.4m at the start of the calculation. Correct article usage
the lowest
Moreover
, the growth of people in New zealand
reached Change the capitalization
Zealand
at
Correct your spelling
a
their
maximum of 4.3m in 2020 which Correct pronoun usage
its
also
estimated 4.7m in 2050.Add a missing verb
is also
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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