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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.

The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, information, problems, people, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 21 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 21 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 21 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 21 times.
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