Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got saticfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude to the staff of your supermarket for their service.
I am a citizen of the neighbourhood where
this
supermarket is located.
First of all, when I entered your market, I was attracted by the tasteful arrangement and storage of products.
Secondly
, the courtesy and hygiene of the servants were the best for me.
I really liked that I got the information I needed about the products as soon as I looked at them.
And of course, the reduction in their prices is a relief for any person.
The staff will always help you if necessary.Thank you for your attention to people and quality service.Come with my friends and family on my next visit.
Your's
faithful, SohibChange noun form
Yours
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Task Achievement
Ensure your introduction sets the context clearly for the reader. While you mentioned being a citizen of the neighbourhood, adding a line about your frequent visits or loyalty to the supermarket could make your introduction more engaging.
Coherence and Cohesion
To enhance the logical structure, consider connecting your paragraphs with smoother transitions, indicating a clear progression from your introduction to the reasons you were satisfied, and finally to your closing thanks and future intent.
Coherence and Cohesion
In terms of coherence, each of your paragraphs introduces a new idea, which is good. However, expanding each idea with more detail or examples could provide a richer context and strengthen the overall impact of your letter.
Task Achievement
Your greeting and closing are suitably formal and polite, which is excellent. To further refine your letter, you could personalize the greeting with the manager's name, if known, to make your letter feel more direct and targeted.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,