The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart depicts the data about the amount of Carbon Dioxide (C02) emitted per head of population in the four Western European Nations in Four decades from 1967 to 2007. The data from the graph was illustrated by the metric
tonnes
.
By and large, United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
had a slight decline over the period. However
, it is noticeable that the high improvement was from Italy and Portugal.
Turning to the details, it was presented by the line graph that in the first decade, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal had a slight increase of
the emission of carbon dioxide, Change preposition
in
while
, on the other hand
, the United Kingdom remained stable (around 11 tonnes
). Moreover
, even though Sweden
had a straight growth in the first decade, which was approximately 10 tonnes
, it fell dramatically over the following three decades. Having similar trends, Italy and Portugal rose slightly in
the beginning of three decades and remained steady in the Change the preposition
at
last
decade which accounted for a mere five tonnes
for Italy and seven tonnes
for Portugal.
Furthermore
, the United Kingdom and Sweden
remained decreasing, while
Italy and Portugal climbed sharply over the periods
of time.Fix the agreement mistake
period
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