The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart depicts the data about the amount of Carbon Dioxide (C02) emitted per head of population in the four Western European Nations in Four decades from 1967 to 2007. The data from the graph was illustrated by the metric
tonnes
.
By and large, Use synonyms
United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
had a slight decline over the period. Use synonyms
However
, it is noticeable that the high improvement was from Italy and Portugal.
Turning to the details, it was presented by the line graph that in the first decade, Linking Words
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal had a slight increase Use synonyms
of
the emission of carbon dioxide, Change preposition
in
while
, Linking Words
on the other hand
, the United Kingdom remained stable (around 11 Linking Words
tonnes
). Use synonyms
Moreover
, even though Linking Words
Sweden
had a straight growth in the first decade, which was approximately 10 Use synonyms
tonnes
, it fell dramatically over the following three decades. Having similar trends, Italy and Portugal rose slightly Use synonyms
in
the beginning of three decades and remained steady in the Change the preposition
at
last
decade which accounted for a mere five Linking Words
tonnes
for Italy and seven Use synonyms
tonnes
for Portugal.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the United Kingdom and Linking Words
Sweden
remained decreasing, Use synonyms
while
Italy and Portugal climbed sharply over the Linking Words
periods
of time.Fix the agreement mistake
period
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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