In
this
era, the nations which have higher standard
time
for working day, are becoming rich but they have some
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with their
people
as payment for
this
policy. I really do agree with the fact that
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economy always makes
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life better and easier,so I choose to
work
more hours to make more
money
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this
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most countries with more
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time
are paying more
money
to
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people
who are working, so
people
are making more
money
than usual . Having more
money
can
keep
people
safe from social
.
For example
, in the U.S.A there is no rule about how much a person has to
work
in companies but most
people
want to
work
more and earn more
money
because they know that there is nothing that they can do with more free
time
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which they can have with more
money
. After all, if
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body
works more he will gain more and when
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Another point of more working hours is the fact that
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they are living
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. It is obvious that if
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body
has to
work
more for a goal, he would pay more attention to that goal.
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world, and
also
they are paying more attention to
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body
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responsible for his nation he will suffer less for social disadvantages and
also
will be more respectful
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the laws.
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this
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of more working
time
in some places of the world. but as I wrote before more working hours
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more
money
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society and
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more responsible
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to save others from negative
points
of that law.
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my opinion working more has
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own negative
points
such
as weaker
between
people
but
this
law's
points
are more than
to
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