Do you think if the government should limit the freedome of the media?

The
media
broadcasts
wide
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range of
contents
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. Some elites believe the
government
should regulate the
media
. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because the
freedome
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freedom
of the
media
is required to have a free society,
as well as
, the
government
is not eligible to regulate the
media
.
Firstly
, the
freedome
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freedom
of the
media
is the
freedome
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freedom
of speech that
grantees
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liberty in society. To ensure we have a free community, we need to let
every one
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to
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state his opinion even if it is against the
govermental
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governmental
government
policies.
As a result
, we need to provide the public with
a
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free
media
that broadcasts people's ideas. And, any limitation on the
media
will let the
government
to
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eliminate
voices
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the voices
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of people who have an eligible right to disagree with it.
Secondly
, the main enemy of any community is its own
government
. Most
cruptions
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eruptions
are done by the governmental authorities. So it is the
media
that
by
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publicising the crimes will prevent the authorities from
commiting
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committing
them.
Therefore
, it is the best way to monitor the authorities' performances.
For example
, if the
government
has
a
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power to limit the
media
, they are highly likely to misuse
this
power to stop activities that reveal its
cruptions
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eruptions
.
Hence
, I believe a criminal like the
government
should not be allowed to limit the
media
which is its court. In conclusion, the
government
should never be allowed to put any
limitation
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limitations
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on the
media
.
Because not
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only these
limitaions
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limitations
could be
threat
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a threat
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to the liberty of
country
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the country
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, but
also
the
government
is not eligible to limit who is monitoring its performance.
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