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The cart below show the temperature and rainfall in equatorial climate and mmediterranean climate.

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The charts illustrate the temperature and
rainfall
 in equatorial and Mediterranean climates between January and
December
. Units are measured in Cu mm and degrees Celsius.
Overall
,
rainfall
 experienced an upward trend, and temperatures remained in the equatorial
climate
.
while
 both had some fluctuations in the Mediterranean
climate
. In an equatorial
climate
,
rainfall
 recorded its highest level in
December
 by over 250 mm.
Although
 there was a small dip from February to October, the values remained unchanged. The temperature of the equatorial
climate
 has remained almost the same throughout the year.
On the other hand
,
rainfall
 in the Mediterranean
climate
 had its highest level in January and
December
,
whereas
 from April to October, it reported a lower level.
Furthermore
,temperature rocketed up until August, and it plummeted to a decrease by
December
 by 20 degrees Celsius.
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