The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the suggestive plan for novel industrial and residential zones for workers, now and in the future.
Overall
, many changes implemented
to change the entire area from Add a missing verb
were implemented
industrial
to completely a residential zone. These changes include replacing all the Correct article usage
an industrial
factories complex
and adding some services for employees.
Fix the agreement mistake
factory complexes
Firstly
, the factory building which is located at right
bottom of the map will change to a new school. Beside the school, a new complex namely a playground is going to be added. Add an article
the right
Moreover
, on the opposite side, there is a novel building which is situated nearly in the middle, called a medical centre.
However
, in the middle bottom, there is only one roundroad, but in the future development, one more will be added. Near those two rounds, there are many factories, which will be removed to make way for shops and new roads.Submitted by f201600285 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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