The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.

The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The provided map illustrates the changes made to a
library
in a
20 years
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20-year
time span. Generally speaking, the
library
was totally modified. All sections of the
library
were replaced with either different book genres or are now used for a completely different purpose. On the east side
on
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of
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the
library
, the enquiry desk to the right of the
entrace
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entrance
was replaced by a Café. The section just next to it went from having adult non-fiction
books
to having the adult fiction
books
that used to be on the west side of the
library
and self-service machines separated by an information desk in the middle.
Similarly
, the children's book section on the north-east was converted into a lecture
room
. The tables and chairs that used to be in the main hall that divided the
library
in two sides were cleared,
while
the reading
room
on the
south-east
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southeast
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was replaced by a computer
room
. There is a new
all
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apply
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reference
books
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book
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right outside of it.
Finally
, the CDs, videos and computer games
room
is now used for
story telling
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storytelling
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events, having added two sofas on the corners of the
room
whilst
also
holding the children's fiction
books
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolve
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • amenities
  • state-of-the-art
  • landscape
  • pedestrian
  • augment
  • spatial
  • demolish
  • construct
  • accessibility
  • innovations
  • extensions
  • facade
  • environmental-friendly
  • urban development
  • public facility
  • modernize
  • technology integration
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