Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

The majority of

museums

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enterence

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fee

,

while

others are free of

charge

. In

this

essay,

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will explain why the benefits of

charge

of the

museums

overshadow the potential drawbacks. In terms of giving a

charge

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the museum

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museum

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it could bring several drawbacks from several aspects.

Museums

are

usualy

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usually

managed or owned by

government

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the government

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and

maintain

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by

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using

government

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budget.

Therefore

, some people believe that

museums

are part of public facilities.

As a result

, people have a perspective that charging

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museums

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museums

are

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unecessary

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unnecessary

necessary

and should be free because they already

paid

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tax

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annually.

Moreover

, many

museums

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museums'

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collections are

an

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ancient items

and

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came from the ancestors,

then

public

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have

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a right to enter the

museums

without any

charge

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about their past. Regarding

to

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paid

museums

, may bring numerous benefits for the owner of

museums

and

public

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the public

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.

Firstly

, not all of the

museums

are owned by

government

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, some of

it

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are

private

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owned.

Therefore

, they should

charge

some

fee

as the source of budget for maintenance

the

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collections, because it is

an old items

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an old item

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and risky to get damaged.

Moreover

, the

museums

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museum's

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items should be

procected

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protected

and monitored,

thus

security

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system is necessary.

Secondly

, if the

museums

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is

charge

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, it could prevent

this

place from unresponsible people

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the place freely. To illustrate, Ulen Sentalu Museum, located in Yogyakarta, is a private

museums

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about the history of Keraton Yogyakarta.

Charge

some

fee

to enter is part

to donate

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for the owner to keep the collections

are

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in

a

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apply

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good

conditions

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as national heritage. In conclusion, charging some

fee

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fees

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to enter the

museums

may disagree

by

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public

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the public

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,

however

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the benefit

from

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of

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giving

charge

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a charge

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is to help the

museums

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management to

paid

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pay

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their maintenance and security

cost

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.

Therefore

, on balance,

i

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remain firmly convinced that the merits are

enclipsed

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enclosed

by the demerits.