Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. *Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.*

In

this

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advanced era,

the

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environmental problems are increasing day by day

due to

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multiple factors. some individuals believe that the cause of

envionmental

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environmental

problems is

endangered

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the endangered

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species of

flaura

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flora

and fauna and

on the other

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hand

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hand,

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some say that there

are

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is

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number

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a number

the number

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of other reasons

such

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as

increase

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an increase

the increase

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in

the

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motor vehicles, wrong disposable methods of waste.I will discuss both

point

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points

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of

views

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view

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.

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with, urbanization and deforestation are the reasons that animals and

plants

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become extinct and

effect

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affect

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the

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biodiversity. People want

luxurious

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a luxurious

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lifestyle for which they are

conitnuously

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continuously

cutting the

plants

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making required

amenties

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amenities

and the

plants

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are the home of many varieties of animals and

plants

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which help to maintain the environment by emiting oxygen.

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, some people

do hunting

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for food or as a source of income

and

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rise

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raising

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problems for

the

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biodiversity issues. on the other side, the increase in the number of automobiles

such

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cars

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as cars

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, buses and trucks

are

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is

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drastically affecting the environment. As these vehicles

emits

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emit

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the

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toxic chemicals which

is

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are

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depleting the ozone layer and

due to

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which

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this

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global warming is increasing.

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, the

buring

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burning

of fossil fuels is

the

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another main reason

of

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for

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polluting the environment which directly

effect

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affects

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the weather conditions.

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, In India,

due to

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air

pollution

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pollution,

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the weather condition has been totally changed . In

conlusion

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conclusion

, both are the reasons which directly or indirectly damage the ecosystem but

i

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opine that biodiversity is damaging

due to

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the hike in the auto vehicles which

emits

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emit

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abnoxious gas and pollute the

surrounddings

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surroundings

surrounding

.