There is a lot of pressure on young people to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children are under a lot of

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to succeed academically because it is a way to easily get a job in the future. Having good grades shows that the child has put in the time and effort to achieve the best marks possible in a certain task.

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characteristic assures the employers that the child will be a good employee in the future.

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essay believes that non-academic

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are equally important

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academic

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.

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is good especially when it is regulated. A good amount of

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helps the

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discover and overcome his limits. Academic

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like Math and Science are important to

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the basic systems in our lives. It helps the

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have a logical point of view. For one, the

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is able to apply Math in calculating expenses, use English to decipher the proper way to communicate, and Science to have a better understanding

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the organs in our body function and how to take proper care of these organs. Notwithstanding the importance of academic

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, non-academic

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as physical education and cookery

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the horizons of the

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. Non-academic

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teaches

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practical

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and other

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that cannot be found in a book. It generally teaches survival

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greatly utilized in the daily activities of a person. Cooking is a life skill that needs to be taught to students just like other vocational

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like

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, automation,

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, among others. These

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will always be relevant and marketable since these are activities that are regularly engaged

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everyday lives. Non-academic

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help the

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discover themselves and gain self-confidence. Some learners may have difficulty understanding academic

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of interest or simply because they are intimidated to study the course. If there are other non-academic

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, students will soon discover their interests and through that interest, they have the intrinsic motivation to study and hone their

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it is true that academic

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are important, non-academic

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still hold the same level of importance. The

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to succeed academically will be lessened when learners soon discover and realign their interests with the line of work they wish to pursue in the future.