When a person becomes a teenager, there are numerous threats that follow them around
as a result
of the state
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bodies
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. One of the greatest struggles in
this
age is the thin line of responsibilities of transforming into an adult. There are many who believe that children under 18 should still be held responsible,
however
, some others state that education is the only correct
path
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such
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. As we look deeper into the issue,
it is clear that
the latter’s response is the better one.
For starters, the youth
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what we have invested our
future
in and putting them behind bars would hurt them and ourselves equally.
Thus
, if people take the approach
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just
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them the mistakes in their ways, we can save ourselves a lot of money and other
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that were spent to raise that kid.
Moreover
, as these people still have
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young and formable
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, learning comes naturally to them.
Therefore
, they will understand the issue with what they did much easier than an adult would.
This
means even educating them would be financially more beneficial.
As a result
, less valuable resources would go to waste and just
instead
with little to no
they will be part of the cycle of life.
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a moral point of view, the crimes they commit are the aftermath of the lessons the previous generation teaches them. It must be our responsibility that
such
innocent creatures have gone so stray
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their
path
arriving at
such
places.
In other words
, a teenager’s
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is the reflection of what they have seen in their parents, teachers and nowadays even media.
As a result
, it would not be fair to punish them, letting the real culprit who led them that way
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. Yet, if education becomes the
path
to take,
then
there might be a bright
future
where the kids help the adults make the right
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.
This
is backed by an experiment done in Ireland by AUT, that showed kids whose
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not come home drunk have
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issues with alcohol than the ones who do.
In conclusion, these kids are the
future
of the planet and punishing them for their mistakes is only the quick way out not the actual fix.
Furthermore
, it should not be forgotten that it was the previous generations
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behaviorsCorrect your spelling
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that led the youth
then
this
path
.
Consequently
, I firmly believe that people under the age
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should be taught and
this
approach could help them become responsible adults in the
future
.