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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative developIments?

#weddings #reason #developiments
Wedding
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Weddings
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 are
connection
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a connection
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 between two beautiful souls and wonderful families, but some
people
 make it
as
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a
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 big approach to show off and other
people
wants
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want
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 to make it memorable for life
time
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lifetime
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.
This
 development
have
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has
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 some drawbacks
while
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some
people
 think it is based on their status in society. On of one hand,
people
 spend
alot
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a lot
 to make
wedding
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weddings
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 attractive and
speacial
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special
. They like to appoint marriage planners, who take care
for
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of
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everthing
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everything
 from food to decorations. They provide ideas based on
budget
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the budget
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 of
client
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the client
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.
Moreover
,
people
 want to make their wedding stand out in their social circle and leave an impact on their minds. In some
weddings
,
groom
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the groom
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 and
bride
 side families offer expensive gifts to
eachother
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each other
,
this
 approach is good if it is not hurting anyone's
feeling
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feelings
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 and not ripping their pockets.
In contrast
, these big cost
weddings
, make some
people
to
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spend out of their budget to make their high standards in society. Even, in
few
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a few
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 areas of
asian
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Asian
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 countries
people
 ask for
dowry
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a dowry
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, which
is putting
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puts
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 pressure on
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the bride
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bride
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bride's
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 family. Some
people
 cannot afford high investments
on
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in
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wedding
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a wedding
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, but after looking at big
wedding
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weddings
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 they demand from
bride
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the bride
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 side.
This
 approach
is giving
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stress
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stresses
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 to
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the bride
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bride
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bride's
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 parents. In conclusion,
the
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apply
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weddings
 should have one settled budget by
higer
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higher
authories
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authorities
authorises
 to avoid any stress on
lower income
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lower-income
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 families. In
this
 way, some greedy
people
 will not demand big
weddings
 and it will lower
down
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apply
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the pressure of spending
huge
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a huge
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 amount on marriage.
Simple
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A simple
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 wedding needs to be introduced to avoid
the
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apply
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society
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society's
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 pressure.
This
 idea will help many
people
 to maintain their pockets and make their lives easier.
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