Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative developIments?
Wedding
are Fix the agreement mistake
Weddings
connection
between two beautiful souls and wonderful families, but some Correct article usage
a connection
people
make it as
big approach to show off and other Correct your spelling
a
people
wants
to make it memorable for life Correct subject-verb agreement
want
time
. Correct your spelling
lifetime
This
development have
some drawbacks Change the verb form
has
while
some Correct word choice
apply
people
think it is based on their status in society.
On of one hand, people
spend alot
to make Correct your spelling
a lot
wedding
attractive and Fix the agreement mistake
weddings
speacial
. They like to appoint marriage planners, who take care Correct your spelling
special
for
Change preposition
of
everthing
from food to decorations. They provide ideas based on Correct your spelling
everything
budget
of Correct article usage
the budget
client
. Add an article
the client
Moreover
, people
want to make their wedding stand out in their social circle and leave an impact on their minds. In some weddings
, groom
and Correct article usage
the groom
bride
side families offer expensive gifts to eachother
, Correct your spelling
each other
this
approach is good if it is not hurting anyone's feeling
and not ripping their pockets.
Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
In contrast
, these big cost weddings
, make some people
to
spend out of their budget to make their high standards in society. Even, in Change the verb form
apply
few
areas of Correct article usage
a few
asian
countries Change the capitalization
Asian
people
ask for dowry
, which Correct article usage
a dowry
is putting
pressure on Wrong verb form
puts
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the bride
bride
family. Some Change noun form
bride's
people
cannot afford high investments on
Change preposition
in
wedding
, but after looking at big Correct article usage
a wedding
wedding
they demand from Fix the agreement mistake
weddings
bride
side. Correct article usage
the bride
This
approach is giving
Verb problem
apply
stress
to Correct subject-verb agreement
stresses
Correct article usage
the bride
bride
parents.
In conclusion, Change noun form
bride's
the
Correct article usage
apply
weddings
should have one settled budget by higer
Correct your spelling
higher
authories
to avoid any stress on Correct your spelling
authorities
authorises
lower income
families. In Add a hyphen
lower-income
this
way, some greedy people
will not demand big weddings
and it will lower down
the pressure of spending Change preposition
apply
huge
amount on marriage. Correct article usage
a huge
Simple
wedding needs to be introduced to avoid Add an article
A simple
The simple
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
pressure. Change noun form
society's
This
idea will help many people
to maintain their pockets and make their lives easier.Submitted by simran.ghariall on
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