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The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.
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The line graph provides a visual representation of the 2008 report, which discusses the usage of non-renewable
resources
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 like
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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, Coal and Natural
Gas
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, and another are renewable
resources
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 like Nuclear Power, Solar, Wind and Hydropower. The data represents a timeline on the X-axis from 1980 to 2008, which states previous trends. And, from 2008 to 2030, states about future trends. On Y-axis, it states about measurable units i.e., Quadrillion Units (
QU
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). In general view,
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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 take the leading position, by surpassing all other types of energy and Hydropower sets at the bottom. Starting from 1980,
petrol
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 and
oil
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, was hitting at 35
QU
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 with slight fluctuation, and
then
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 reaching to 40
QU
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 in 2003.
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, it's forecasted that by 2030,
Petrol
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 and
Oil
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 will hit approximately 50
QU
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 which is the highest amongst all other
resources
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.
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, as per consumption analysis, Natural
Gas
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 was around 20
QU
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 leaving Coal behind at approximately 16
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, especially before 1995. From, 1995 to 2008, a slight variation between Coal and Natural
Gas
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 can be seen. After 2008, Coal takes a stand in comparison to Natural
Gas
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 roughly at 27 and 23 respectively. In terms of all
resources
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, American’s consumption of all renewable had been the least prefered. Till 1990, all renewable products fall below 5
QU
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. But, from 1990 to 2005, nuclear power touched slightly above 5QU and others can be seen with minute changes. Even, the projected trend of these energy consumption products falls within the range of 2 to 8
QU
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.
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, data depicts the future demands for energy-efficient
resources
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 will be comparatively low.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words resources, petrol, oil, gas, qu with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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