some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it's wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
People
view Use synonyms
marriage
in various ways; a kind of social contract or fruit of Use synonyms
love
. It is believed by a select few that choosing a spouse from an economic perspective is better, Use synonyms
while
others say Linking Words
marriage
should be based on affection. I strongly believe Use synonyms
people
should marry whom they Use synonyms
love
. Use synonyms
This
essay will demonstrate both views and the Linking Words
reason
why Use synonyms
love
should be the baseline of Use synonyms
marriage
.
First of all, Use synonyms
couples
will meet difficulties and challenges throughout their Use synonyms
marriage
, and only the relationship based on Use synonyms
love
can make them overcome the adversary. Use synonyms
For example
, when Linking Words
wife
or husband loses a lot of Correct article usage
a wife
money
because of his/her business failure, the other encourages the partner to start again and they can get through it. Use synonyms
This
is not easy if trust, loyalty, and Linking Words
love
between Use synonyms
couples
Use synonyms
are not exist
. The stronger relationship between wives and husbands is from Change the verb form
does not exist
love
, not Use synonyms
money
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some folk Linking Words
says
we are living in Correct subject-verb agreement
say
the
Correct article usage
a
materialism
society, so Replace the word
materialistic
that
Correct word choice
apply
people
should consider Use synonyms
partners'
wealth when deciding Correct pronoun usage
their partners'
Use synonyms
marriage
. Change preposition
on marriage
For instance
, as housing prices Linking Words
are
soaring recently, Wrong verb form
have been
couples
who marry those who have Use synonyms
fortune
are more likely to purchase a house much faster than individuals whose partners do not have enough Correct article usage
a fortune
money
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
people
can earn Use synonyms
fortune
at once but they can lose all Add an article
a fortune
money
by just one mistake. If your partner loses all the Use synonyms
money
he/she has, Use synonyms
then
do you abandon your partner for that Linking Words
reason
? Cash should not Use synonyms
the
only Add a missing verb
be the
reason
for Use synonyms
marriage
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
money
is one of the essential things in our lives, Use synonyms
marriaged
Correct your spelling
married
marriage
marriages
couples
with Use synonyms
love
can achieve or bear everything with their Use synonyms
cement
relationship. I firmly believe that Replace the word
cemented
love
should be the first Use synonyms
reason
for Use synonyms
marriage
.Use synonyms
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