You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
map examines some possible spots for a brand new shopping centre is
going to be built in Brandfield. Not only Correct pronoun usage
that is
the
location partly divided into two Add a missing verb
is the
area
by a river, but Change to a plural noun
areas
also
each of the aimed spots have
Change the verb form
has
their
own uniqueness Correct pronoun usage
its
as well as
get surrounded by versatile features.
The S1 area, which is planned to be located in Correct article usage
a nothern
nothern
location aims to be centred by various infrastructure Correct your spelling
northern
another
such
as a city centre, housing estate, road, and railway. This
spot is the most strategic one where citizen do
not Change the verb form
does
need
go to the Add the particle
need to
metroplitan
district whenever they need to purchase stuff for their daily needs. More than that, the golf course and park Correct your spelling
metropolitan
is establish
in the southwest of the future shopping mall which Change the verb form
is established
enrich
Change the verb form
enriches
Correct article usage
the facility
facility
around that place.
Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
In contrast
with S1, shopping
centre in S2 will be constructed in the northeast area where it is closely situated with the only one industrial estate in the city in order to make the distribution of stuff easier. Add an article
a shopping
the shopping
In addition
, it is obvious to highlight that S2 have some similarities with S1 where both fields will be placed in the midway of a railway and street in
Change preposition
with
aim
to be accessible and efficient for Correct article usage
the aim
public
to visit either with Add an article
the public
a
public transportation or their own conveyances.Remove the article
apply
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