You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

This

map examines some possible spots for a brand new shopping centre

is

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that is

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going to be built in Brandfield. Not only

the

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is the

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location partly divided into two

area

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areas

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by a river, but

also

each of the aimed spots

have

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has

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their

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its

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own uniqueness

as well as

get surrounded by versatile features. The S1 area, which is planned to be located in

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a nothern

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nothern

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northern

another

location aims to be centred by various infrastructure

such

as a city centre, housing estate, road, and railway.

This

spot is the most strategic one where citizen

do

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does

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not

need

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need to

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go to the

metroplitan

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metropolitan

district whenever they need to purchase stuff for their daily needs. More than that, the golf course and park

is establish

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is established

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in the southwest of the future shopping mall which

enrich

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enriches

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the facility

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facility

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facilities

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around that place.

In contrast

with S1,

shopping

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a shopping

the shopping

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centre in S2 will be constructed in the northeast area where it is closely situated with the only one industrial estate in the city in order to make the distribution of stuff easier.

In addition

, it is obvious to highlight that S2 have some similarities with S1 where both fields will be placed in the midway of a railway and street

in

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with

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aim

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the aim

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to be accessible and efficient for

public

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the public

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to visit either with

a

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apply

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public transportation or their own conveyances.