The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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education
in adult ages. The first bar chart illustrates the reasons why people decide to study
in mature age. The pie chart preveils
how Correct your spelling
reveals
prevails
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apply
assumes
the fee of Change the verb form
assume
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education
have
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has
proportion
between Add an article
a proportion
tax payer
, employer and individual.
first and foremost, Over 35 Correct your spelling
taxpayer
percent
of survey Change the spelling
per cent
corespondens
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respondents
agrees
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agree
proffesionals
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professionals
professional
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adults Correct subject-verb agreement
take
education
because they are interest
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are interested
subject
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the subject
also
to gain qualifications. On the other hand
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the prospect
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be helpful
percent
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per cent
population
. Meanwhile, the bottom two Add an article
the population
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reasons
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per cent
are
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people
while
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amount from Correct article usage
a certain
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taxpayers
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allocate
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cost
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costs
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the
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of
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this
percentage around
25%. Not Add a missing verb
is around
also
government
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the government
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the employer
employer
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employers
needs
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hopes
they
pay only 40% for Correct pronoun usage
apply
study
burdens.
In conclusion, from survey of adult education
show
the reason Correct subject-verb agreement
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person take
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people
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is because
are interest
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are interested
subject
and to gain qualification. And the total Add an article
the subject
of
money they Change preposition
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willing
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are willing
around
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theirself
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themselves
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