The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.

The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
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The provided maps show the differences between the central
library
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20
years
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ago and now. In summary, there have been massive changes since twenty
years
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ago, when the main thing that stayed in the same position was the entrance. Most of the
sections
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are being changed or moved to different
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in the
library
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. The differences between both
years
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will be explained in the next paragraph. 20
years
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ago, there were 5 main
sections
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in the central
library
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, namely the CDs, videos, and
computer
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games
room
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, the
children
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's book, the reading
room
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, and the
adult
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fiction
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and nonfiction
sections
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. The left wing of the
library
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consisted of the CDs, videos, and
computer
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games
room
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, the
adult
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fiction
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books
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, and the reading
room
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,
while
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the
right wing
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consisted of the
children
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's book
section
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, the
adult
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non-
fiction
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books
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section
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, and the enquiry
desk
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. The enquiry
desk
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was located on the right from the entrance which provides tickets, book returns, and other facilities.
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, there were tables and chairs in the middle of the
library
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. Nowadays, the
library
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sections
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have gone to a full transformation, where it consists of the
computer
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room
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, the
children
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's
fiction
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books
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section
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, the all reference
books
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section
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, and the lecture
room
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. The enquiry
desk
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shrank into an information
desk
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, which is located in the east of the place,
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the old location
were
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transformed into a cafe. People can borrow and return
books
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with the self-service machines next to the information
desk
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. The reading
room
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changed into the
computer
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room
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, where
this
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section
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is originally on the top left of the
library
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. There are several additional facilities in the
children
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's
fiction
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books
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section
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such
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as sofas and storytelling events. The
adult
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fiction
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books
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relocated to the east side of the
library
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, and the old location turned into the all-reference
books
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section
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years, sections, computer, room, children, adult, fiction, books, section, desk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolve
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • amenities
  • state-of-the-art
  • landscape
  • pedestrian
  • augment
  • spatial
  • demolish
  • construct
  • accessibility
  • innovations
  • extensions
  • facade
  • environmental-friendly
  • urban development
  • public facility
  • modernize
  • technology integration
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