The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.

The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The provided maps show the differences between the central
library
20
years
ago and now. In summary, there have been massive changes since twenty
years
ago, when the main thing that stayed in the same position was the entrance. Most of the
sections
are being changed or moved to different
location
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locations
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in the
library
. The differences between both
years
will be explained in the next paragraph. 20
years
ago, there were 5 main
sections
in the central
library
, namely the CDs, videos, and
computer
games
room
, the
children
's book, the reading
room
, and the
adult
fiction
and nonfiction
sections
. The left wing of the
library
consisted of the CDs, videos, and
computer
games
room
, the
adult
fiction
books
, and the reading
room
,
while
the
right wing
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consisted of the
children
's book
section
, the
adult
non-
fiction
books
section
, and the enquiry
desk
. The enquiry
desk
was located on the right from the entrance which provides tickets, book returns, and other facilities.
Last
, there were tables and chairs in the middle of the
library
. Nowadays, the
library
sections
have gone to a full transformation, where it consists of the
computer
room
, the
children
's
fiction
books
section
, the all reference
books
section
, and the lecture
room
. The enquiry
desk
shrank into an information
desk
, which is located in the east of the place,
while
the old location
were
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was
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transformed into a cafe. People can borrow and return
books
with the self-service machines next to the information
desk
. The reading
room
changed into the
computer
room
, where
this
section
is originally on the top left of the
library
. There are several additional facilities in the
children
's
fiction
books
section
such
as sofas and storytelling events. The
adult
fiction
books
relocated to the east side of the
library
, and the old location turned into the all-reference
books
section
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years, sections, computer, room, children, adult, fiction, books, section, desk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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