The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture provided,
delineate
Correct subject-verb agreement
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a
Correct article usage
the
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process of
central
Correct article usage
a central
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heating system in a house. The first process
,
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is when the cold
water
flowed
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flows
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into hot
water
radiators and
pumped
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is pumped
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into a boiler full
with
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of
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gas or oil so the cold
water
transformed
Wrong verb form
transforms
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into hot
water
. The hot
water
stored in the storage tank to kept
in
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at
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a perfect heat temperature and flowed into the overflow pipe. The hot
water
is now ready to use
by in
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with
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installed tap
water
. In conclusion, once the
water
flowed
to
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into
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the building through pipes and radiators. It is returned to the boiler to reheat and circulate around the mansion again.
Also
, part of the hot
water
rolls into the taps in the rooms as well.
This
process happens continuously.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Central heating system
  • Boiler
  • Radiator
  • Pipes
  • Circulate
  • Heat source
  • Thermostat
  • Convection
  • Combustion
  • Energy-efficient
  • Flow rate
  • Expansion tank
  • Hot water cylinder
  • Insulation
  • Temperature control
  • Pump
  • Valves
  • Heat exchanger
  • Programmable
  • Zoned heating
  • Renewable energy
  • Double glazing
  • Carbon footprint
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