The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture provided,
delineate
Correct subject-verb agreement
delineates
a
process of Correct article usage
the
central
heating system in a house. The first processCorrect article usage
a central
,
is when the cold Remove the comma
apply
water
flowed
into hot Wrong verb form
flows
water
radiators and pumped
into a boiler full Add a missing verb
is pumped
with
gas or oil so the cold Change preposition
of
water
transformed
into hot Wrong verb form
transforms
water
.
The hot water
stored in the storage tank to kept in
a perfect heat temperature and flowed into the overflow pipe. The hot Change preposition
at
water
is now ready to use by in
installed tap Change preposition
with
water
.
In conclusion, once the water
flowed to
the building through pipes and radiators. It is returned to the boiler to reheat and circulate around the mansion again. Change preposition
into
Also
, part of the hot water
rolls into the taps in the rooms as well. This
process happens continuously.Submitted by indyynaila on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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