The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2001.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of purchased and rented purchased
accommodation
in 2 countries between 1918 and 2001.
It is interesting to note the percentage of purchased accommodation
increased gradually over a given period of time. Whereas
, the popularity of rented housing decreased considerably over those years.
At first sight
it's clear that rented housing had its highest peak in 1981, which was almost 80%, respectively. Add a comma
sight,
In contrast
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,
accommodation
had its lowest point, nearly at 25%.
According to
the data demonstrated household
in purchased Fix the agreement mistake
households
accommodation
had positive results, especially between 1991 and 2001, reaching its highest point just
under 80%. Change preposition
of just
In contrast
with
purchased housing, had shown the lowest proportions (just over 30%) during those years.
Change preposition
apply
To sum up
, the popularity of the two sections had fluctuated over the course of time , not including the results in 1971 when they experienced a period of equality.Submitted by esenkulova.ulbosyn on
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