The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs indicate the modifications of

road

Use synonyms

access to a local hospital during a 3-year interval.

Overall

Linking Words

, it is explicit that the main difference is that the

hospital

Change noun form

hospital's

show examples

sorroundings

Correct your spelling

surroundings

has

Correct subject-verb agreement

have

show examples

been expanded with the aim

creating

Change preposition

of creating

show examples

more space for both staff and people. Focusing on the initial phase, what stands out from the

sheme

Correct your spelling

scheme

is that it was designed too basically. In more detail, it was accommodated with six bus stops

along side

Correct your spelling

alongside

show examples

the hospital

road

Use synonyms

; more than

this

Linking Words

, a public car park was located on the eastern side of

this

Linking Words

road

Use synonyms

.

Also

Linking Words

, the hospital was

sorrounded

Correct your spelling

surrounded

only by a ring

road

Use synonyms

which was directly connected to the city

road

Use synonyms

. After alternations, it can be seen that several actions have

took

Change the verb form

taken

show examples

place

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

in order to develop facilities.

Firstly

Linking Words

, employees’ parking has

been became

Wrong verb form

become

show examples

bigger by taking up room from the bus stops;

also

Linking Words

, a new place, on the eastern corner of the hospital, is dedicated to people’s cars.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, a new bus station is constructed on the left hand of the hospital

road

Use synonyms

between two new

roundabout

Change to a plural noun

roundabouts

show examples

, which are built at both ends of

this

Linking Words

street. All the left parts stayed

at

Change preposition

in

show examples

the same format as it was in 2007.