The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs indicate the modifications of
road
access to a local hospital during a 3-year interval.
Overall
, it is explicit that the main difference is that the hospital
Change noun form
hospital's
sorroundings
Correct your spelling
surroundings
has
been expanded with the aim Correct subject-verb agreement
have
creating
more space for both staff and people.
Focusing on the initial phase, what stands out from the Change preposition
of creating
sheme
is that it was designed too basically. In more detail, it was accommodated with six bus stops Correct your spelling
scheme
along side
the hospital Correct your spelling
alongside
road
; more than this
, a public car park was located on the eastern side of this
road
. Also
, the hospital was sorrounded
only by a ring Correct your spelling
surrounded
road
which was directly connected to the city road
.
After alternations, it can be seen that several actions have took
place Change the verb form
taken
with
in order to develop facilities. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, employees’ parking has been became
bigger by taking up room from the bus stops; Wrong verb form
become
also
, a new place, on the eastern corner of the hospital, is dedicated to people’s cars. Furthermore
, a new bus station is constructed on the left hand of the hospital road
between two new roundabout
, which are built at both ends of Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
this
street. All the left parts stayed at
the same format as it was in 2007.Change preposition
in
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