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Not enough student chose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What's the effects on society?

#student #science #subjects #university #countries #reason #effects #society
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students are not
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choosing
science
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graduate.in my opinion one reason for
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also
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 on our society
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lack
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 of scientists .
science
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skill and
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science
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 fairly laborious task
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, they have to follow some of
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 without have any
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subject
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that is
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 give you a clear idea , we were 20 students when we where in high school but we have not applied for
science
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humans
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need
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subjects
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specially
especially
science
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knowledege
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knowledge
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earth
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 as well. so lack of information about
science
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 problem in order to we can not
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 out new things in the world like mobile ,
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 of work
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scientists
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our life might
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 off from
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the world
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furthermore
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 are going to be back . in conclusion, students are not more
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interested
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science
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perspective
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the main reason is it is somewhat intricate and hard to
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,but at the same
time
 the number of
scienists
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scientists
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are
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 going to be less and less which it will be one of
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our society
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 in near future .
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