The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tabular format illustrates how
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of money
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bifurcated among
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the National
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government, Local Taxes and other sources for the time period 2017-2018 in the euro.
While
, the two pie charts show how the money was spent on Salaries, Technologies and Building & Transport in one of the areas of Britain. In general view, the budget allocation of all
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had increased in total and
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on an individual basis. When considering the spending perspective, remuneration has received the highest emphasis. In the Police Budget, the National government and other sources have received a nominal upsurge in total allocation when compared with both the years i.e., 2017 and 2018. But, Local Taxes has provided with almost upscale of 10 pointers i.e., 91.2m in 2017 to 102.3m in 2018. So, the government hopes for major collection from Local Taxes when compared with others. In terms of how collection money has been utilized for what purposes. The ministry was focused on technology spending - it just got more than double the amount i.e., approximately 2200m to 4500m.
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, the spending on Building and transport is slightly more than in 2017 in 2018. But, the contribution to salaries almost remained the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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