The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph illustrates the number of foreign tourists to three different places in a European nation in 2 decades (1987-2007).
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there was an increase in the number of tourists in all three categories over the period of twenty years. At the beginning of the period the most considerable segment was the seaboard,
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the least categories were the lakes.
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of the interval, the mountains became the lowest section. And the largest was the coast. In 1987, the coast dominated with 40
thousand
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visitors.
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, the lakes were the least visited with only 10
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.
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, the number of trippers opting
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lakes rose dramatically from 10 to 75
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before declining steeply to 50
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by 2007. The figure of tourists to the mountains saw steady growth over 2 decades, starting with 20
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and ending with approximately 35
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. Visitors preferring the coast fluctuated over the same time, dropping from 40 to roughly 35
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from 1987 to 1992 before more than doubling to 75
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by 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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