The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The charts show information about students who left college in graduate and postgraduate did not go into full-time, but they went to do some activities
such
as part-time jobs, voluntary work
, further
studies, and unemployment in 2008 in the UK. As can be seen from the charts, it is obvious that further
study is the most popular while
voluntary work
is the lowest in both graduates
and postgraduate students.
In detail, further
study is the highest in the number of students, with 29665 graduates
and 2725 postgraduates
. Then
, the second famous activity is part-time work
, with 17735 graduates
and 2535 postgraduates
.
Looking at the details, unemployment is the third rank, with 16235 graduates
and 1625 postgraduates
. Also
, the lowest figure is voluntary work
, with 3500 graduates
and just 345 postgraduates
.
In conclusion, whether graduates
or postgraduates
have the maximum amount in further
study and the minimum amount in voluntary tasks. Also
,the number of graduates
was significantly higher than the postgraduates
, accounting for 1 to 10.Submitted by champperkhu on
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