The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data given presents information on the change of tourists for international travel in five different
destinations
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on
four different years from 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005 in Change preposition
in
million
.
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Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
traveled
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travelled
increasing
during Wrong verb form
increased
five-year
given period for each different travel Add an article
a five-year
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destinations
with Europe as the most Fix the agreement mistake
destination
favourite
and Use synonyms
Middle
East Correct article usage
the Middle
and
the least Correct word choice
as
favourite
.
In 1990, Europe became the most Use synonyms
favourite
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destinations
to visit, Fix the agreement mistake
destination
recorded
the largest Wrong verb form
recording
number
of visitors at 280,2 Use synonyms
million
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people
and its Use synonyms
number
kept adding until the end of Use synonyms
observed
period with 400,2 Add an article
the observed
million
tourists. In the same year, there Use synonyms
are
9,8 Wrong verb form
were
million
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people
who visited Use synonyms
Middle
East and it Correct article usage
the Middle
recorded
as the smallest Add a missing verb
was recorded
number
of tourists visiting the place. Use synonyms
EVen
though the Correct your spelling
Even
number
kept increasing slightly, it still became the least Use synonyms
favourite
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options
to travel.
As the second and third most Fix the agreement mistake
option
favourite
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destinations
, America and Asia and the Use synonyms
pacific
noted that there were 80,5 Capitalize word
Pacific
million
and 60,2 Use synonyms
million
in the year Use synonyms
of
1990 respectively. Change preposition
apply
Although
both Linking Words
destinations
kept increasing for Use synonyms
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
number
over 15 years later, Asia and the Use synonyms
pasicific
recorded more Correct your spelling
Pacific
number
of Use synonyms
tourist
at 135,8 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
million
, Use synonyms
surpassed
America with 113,2 Wrong verb form
surpassing
million
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people
in 2005.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words destinations, million, number, people, favourite with synonyms.
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