The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data given presents information on the change of tourists for international travel in five different
destinations
on
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four different years from 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005 in
million
.
Overall
, the total
number
of
people
who
traveled
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travelled
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increasing
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increased
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during
five-year
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a five-year
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given period for each different travel
destinations
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destination
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with Europe as the most
favourite
and
Middle
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the Middle
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East
and
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as
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the least
favourite
. In 1990, Europe became the most
favourite
destinations
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to visit,
recorded
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recording
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the largest
number
of visitors at 280,2
million
people
and its
number
kept adding until the end of
observed
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the observed
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period with 400,2
million
tourists. In the same year, there
are
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9,8
million
people
who visited
Middle
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the Middle
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East and it
recorded
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was recorded
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as the smallest
number
of tourists visiting the place.
EVen
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though the
number
kept increasing slightly, it still became the least
favourite
options
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to travel. As the second and third most
favourite
destinations
, America and Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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noted that there were 80,5
million
and 60,2
million
in the year
of
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1990 respectively.
Although
both
destinations
kept increasing for
its
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their
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number
over 15 years later, Asia and the
pasicific
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Pacific
recorded more
number
of
tourist
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tourists
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at 135,8
million
,
surpassed
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surpassing
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America with 113,2
million
people
in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words destinations, million, number, people, favourite with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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