If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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product
and customer needs are met, advertising becomes unneeded. However
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.
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products
such
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. Even without advertisement
, they can still obtain a high number of sales because people certainly need them and then
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customers
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such
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