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In many countries import food from other contry of the world.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this kasur.

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In the contemporary era, importing and exporting are very busy
due to
 modern technology and many
countries
 use
this
 trend to import
food
 like rice, wheat and many other items from different
countries
 for their public. In
this
 essay, I will try to explain the merits and pitfalls of
this
 kasur. The preponderant merits are,
many
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that many
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countries
 do not have an adequate amount of land or infertile land and do not have appropriate weather to grow a variety of
food
 products and they import them from a different nation to fulfil the needs of the people .
For example
, The UAE does not
appropriate
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have appropriate
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 weather conditions for growing wheat and they are importing wheat from India
at
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in
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 large amounts to complete the necessities of the nation.
Hence
, importing helps many kingdoms to
complete
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meet
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 the demand and necessities of their individuals.
Whereas
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However
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, the trends have negative consequences on the public of the exporting
countries
 as the government or the business owner of the exporting
countries
 export their variety of good
food
 to other
countries
 and the public of the nation has leftover
food
 which sells at a high price which makes many troubles to the individuals.
For instance
, In India, most of the public does not appropriate
food
 or
food
 at high prices because the government exports
food
 at high prices which is the main reason for poverty in India.
Therefore
, exporting or importing
food
 products by many
countries
 can have a very negative effect on the public of the production country. In conclusion, importing is
good
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a good
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 way for
countries
 who do not have enough
food
 for the public so they need to import
food
 from other states but it has many drawbacks to exporting
countries
.
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