In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

Nowadays,an increasing rate of life expectancy is

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occurring

in many countries around the world. Some individuals believe that

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phenomenon has several issues for the

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government

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others consider them as a valuable part of the society. In

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I am concerned that its merits outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, the most significant problem of an ageing population for the authorities

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is providing

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relevant conditions.

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of citizens require

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special support,medical provision and attention.

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qualified healthcare and social welfare systems. A colossal amounts of

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from the budget are demanded

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these facilities and

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lifestyle. Japan,could be regarded as an example,where the government spends a great part of

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resources to cater

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needs of elder people.

On the other hand

, an ageing population offers numerous benefits for the prosperity of the nation. The impact of grandparents

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the preservation of a cultural heritage and traditions

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is undeniable.

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given by them

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helpful for youngsters,

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based on

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lifetime experiences.

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Uzbekistan

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grandparents play a paramount role in

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the majority

of families.

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is why younger members ask for their guidance and

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on the wisdom of older ones,before making important decisions. In conclusion, despite some problems for the authorities mentioned before, an ageing population is an inseparable part of our

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. They give an opportunity for intergenerational knowledge exchange. So it leads to

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harmonious,enlightened society and helps to maintain the cultural and traditional values.