The chart below show waste collection by recycling center from 2011 to 2015.
The bar chart compared the figures for
waste
collections in four categories at a recycling center
between 2011 and 2015.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is noticeable that waste
collections for all areas increased, in particular
for the
paper Correct article usage
apply
waste
which was generally highest throught out
the period. Correct your spelling
throughout
In contrast
, garden and tin waste
were less commonly recycled.
There was a consistent decrease for
the amount of paper Change preposition
in
waste
from 57 tons
to 40 tons
by
2011 to 2013, Change preposition
from
however
, the data increasing
dramatically Wrong verb form
increased
to
the rest of the period Change preposition
for
reached
a top Correct word choice
and reached
to
70 Change preposition
of
tons
at
2015. Change preposition
in
Similarity
, in 2011, the Replace the word
Similarly
figures
for glass Fix the agreement mistake
figure
waste
was 48 tons
then
it slightly decreased to 41 tons
by the year 2012. The figure then
recovered to it
initial number, overtaking the statistic for paper in 2013, and fluctuated around 50 Correct pronoun usage
its
tons
for the rest of the time surveys.
The number of tins waste
was erratic around 35 Change preposition
of waste
tons
for the 5-year-period and reached 39 tons
in 2015. Meanwhile, the garden waste
was lowest at 32 tons
in 2011, and
dropping to 15 Correct word choice
apply
tons
in 2012, before rebounding to 31 tons
the next year and finishing at 35 tons
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