The chart below show waste collection by recycling center from 2011 to 2015.

The chart below show waste collection by recycling center from 2011 to 2015.
The bar chart compared the figures for
waste
collections in four categories at a recycling
center
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between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, it is noticeable that
waste
collections for all areas increased,
in particular
for
the
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paper
waste
which was generally highest
throught out
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throughout
the period.
In contrast
, garden and tin
waste
were less commonly recycled. There was a consistent decrease
for
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the amount of paper
waste
from 57
tons
to 40
tons
by
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2011 to 2013,
however
, the data
increasing
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dramatically
to
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for
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the rest of the period
reached
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and reached
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a top
to
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of
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70
tons
at
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in
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2015.
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, in 2011, the
figures
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for glass
waste
was 48
tons
then
it slightly decreased to 41
tons
by the year 2012. The figure
then
recovered to
it
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its
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initial number, overtaking the statistic for paper in 2013, and fluctuated around 50
tons
for the rest of the time surveys. The number of tins
waste
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was erratic around 35
tons
for the 5-year-period and reached 39
tons
in 2015. Meanwhile, the garden
waste
was lowest at 32
tons
in 2011,
and
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dropping to 15
tons
in 2012, before rebounding to 31
tons
the next year and finishing at 35
tons
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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