The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the number of
visitor's
tourists Change noun form
visitors
in
a Caribbean island Change preposition
on
during
2010 to 2017. Change preposition
from
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the total percentage of visitor's tourists from 2010 to 2017 was slightly increasing from 1 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
to 3.5 Change to a singular noun
million
Use synonyms
millions
.
Change to singular
million
According to
what was shown, the average of visitors who Linking Words
are
staying on Unnecessary verb
apply
island
Add an article
the island
was
rapidly growing up during 2011 to 2012 from 0.7 Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
millions
to 1.4 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, the average of visitors who are staying on cruise Linking Words
ship
Fix the agreement mistake
ships
was
slightly Unnecessary verb
apply
falling down
from 0.5 million to 0.3 million.
After that , the rate in both were sWrong verb form
fell
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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