Robotics is necessary for future human development. But it has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
robotics
is essential for our growth in the future, and its advantages Use synonyms
outweight
than disadvantages. Correct your spelling
outweigh
This
Linking Words
assey
will discuss both pros and cons in detail, and will be provided my personal view.
On the one hand, Looking towards the Correct your spelling
essay
assay
posetive
aspects, it can be Correct your spelling
positive
cairtainly
said that Correct your spelling
certainly
Use synonyms
robotics
not only beneficial but Add a verb
robotics is
robotics was
also
necessary. In Linking Words
this
technology-focused world Linking Words
old-fashion
style Correct your spelling
old-fashioned
in
no longer practical and we have Correct your spelling
is
be thought
about using some new tools like Wrong verb form
been thinking
robotics
with Use synonyms
latest
Correct article usage
the latest
breakthrows
. It brings Correct your spelling
breakthroughs
people
aware and Use synonyms
inform
them about Correct subject-verb agreement
informs
wide
Correct article usage
a wide
rang
of information that we cannot even imagine them. Correct your spelling
range
For example
, when Linking Words
i
want to learn Change the capitalization
I
new
language, Add an article
a new
i
do not need Change the capitalization
I
mentor
because Add an article
a mentor
Use synonyms
robats
exist and Correct your spelling
robots
it
would teach me in the best way. And it would help us to discover some Correct pronoun usage
they
importatnt
Correct your spelling
important
thing
that might be useful for human Fix the agreement mistake
things
being
.
Fix the agreement mistake
beings
On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
are against the Use synonyms
avobe-mentioned
view. they are of the opinion thatCorrect your spelling
aforementioned
,
itRemove the comma
apply
warn
them, and it could put their tremendous opportunity in danger, Change the verb form
warns
due to
they might lose the boat or lose their job. In the near futureLinking Words
Add a comma
,
Use synonyms
robats
. For Correct your spelling
robots
instans
, it could be predicted that, if we have sufficient Correct your spelling
instance
Use synonyms
robats
, Correct your spelling
robots
this
world does not require some expert Linking Words
peple
to make Correct your spelling
people
their
huge effort Change the word
a
for doing
their best, Change preposition
to do
instead
they use Linking Words
Use synonyms
robats
Correct your spelling
robots
for doing
all the Change preposition
to do
job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
immidietely
. Correct your spelling
immediately
Furthurmore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
people
would not have income anymore. Use synonyms
People
would not rely on other's potential talents and Use synonyms
skill
and they prefer to choose the easy way. So it is plausible that Fix the agreement mistake
skills
people
assume, it Use synonyms
causes
eradicate their Verb problem
will
life
in the near future.
In conclusion, if Fix the agreement mistake
lives
we
able to use Add a verb
we are
we were
robotics
Use synonyms
truely
, we will witness Correct your spelling
truly
country
Correct article usage
the country
florishing
. We are not allowed to use them in any field, and Correct your spelling
flourishing
government
should limit Correct article usage
the government
for
us. Correct pronoun usage
them for
In addition
, Linking Words
policy makers
ought to be aware and inform Correct your spelling
policymakers
people
.Use synonyms
Submitted by hastytajassosy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction requires a clearer thesis statement that outlines your view. Each paragraph should start with a clear topic sentence. Try to use more cohesive devices to better link your ideas.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task equally. This includes discussing both views comprehensively and providing a clear opinion. Avoid repetition and ensure that each paragraph expands on a new idea.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example