The graph below gives information about monthly electricity, water and gas use at a leisure centre in Manchester. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about monthly electricity, water and gas use at a leisure centre in Manchester. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below shows
electricity
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,
water
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, and
gas
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data at a leisure centre in Manchester from
January
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to December.
Overall
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,
water
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and
electricity
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have a bigger
number
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of
use
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than
gas
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. The
use
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of
water
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is over than 4 in
January
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,
then
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fluctuates and significantly rises from June and gets the peak in August with 5.5 as the
number
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. In the following month, the
use
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of
water
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drops to 4.3 and steady to 4.2 until December. In
January
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,
electricity
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has its peak
number
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at 5.5,
then
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dramatically decreases in the middle of the year to 2.5 in July. But, in the next months, the
number
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increases and has a position at 4.9 in December.
On the other hand
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, the amount of
gas
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is not as high as
water
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and
electricity
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.
Gas
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use
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in
January
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is only 4 and slightly increases in February, but
then
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significantly decreases in June to 2.5,
although
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the
use
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of that increases and fluctuates in the following months where gets 3.9
at the end
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of the year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water, gas, january, number, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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