The graph below gives information about monthly electricity, water and gas use at a leisure centre in Manchester. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about monthly electricity, water and gas use at a leisure centre in Manchester. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below shows
electricity
,
water
, and
gas
data at a leisure centre in Manchester from
January
to December.
Overall
,
water
and
electricity
have a bigger
number
of
use
than
gas
. The
use
of
water
is over than 4 in
January
,
then
fluctuates and significantly rises from June and gets the peak in August with 5.5 as the
number
. In the following month, the
use
of
water
drops to 4.3 and steady to 4.2 until December. In
January
,
electricity
has its peak
number
at 5.5,
then
dramatically decreases in the middle of the year to 2.5 in July. But, in the next months, the
number
increases and has a position at 4.9 in December.
On the other hand
, the amount of
gas
is not as high as
water
and
electricity
.
Gas
use
in
January
is only 4 and slightly increases in February, but
then
significantly decreases in June to 2.5,
although
the
use
of that increases and fluctuates in the following months where gets 3.9
at the end
of the year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water, gas, january, number, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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