the chart below shows the number of houesholds in the us by thier annual income in 2007 , 2011 and 2015
The bar chart gives information about the number of per family in terms of their yearly earning in
the
us in three different years.
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It is clear that
the figure for salaries which were 100000 or more increased the most in comparison with the others from 2007 to 2015.However
,the other number went up and down or stayed steady during this
period.
According to
the given data, People who earned the most went down slightly but finally
peaked at about 34,which still remained the highest in three distinct years.These figures were nearly double as high as those for people who made the second highest income. There were slightly decreased,at around 13 and stood at 15 eventually.
There were the same trends between families with the lowest income and households with the second lowest salaries.The
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initially
rose but a little declined
in 2015,at almost 27 and 28 respectively.Verb problem
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By contrast
with the above categories,the number of people in the middle class levelled out,at approximately 21, throughout out
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