WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two-pie chart illustrates the recreational

activities

of older people between 1985 and 1995 in various categories, like watching

, talking with friends, eating out, and other things.

Overall

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this

year, watching

was the most famous activity for old people, and eating out has changed a lot over the years. First of all, the free time activity of European older citizens has varied between 5 categories, but the most enjoyable activity is watching

(32%).

Follwed

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Followed

by eating out

also

increased a lot in 1985 by 23% as compared to other

activities

Conversely

, conversing with family and friends is probably comparable at 18% and 21%, respectively. and other

activities

are not as important as earlier, which is why other

activities

are least popular at about 6%.

On the other hand

, in 1995, the least popular tasks among older people were eating out, talking with family, and other

activities

, at 8%, 7%, and 2%, respectively. But the most popular

pasttime

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past time

pastime

pastimes

is watching

, about 30%.

While

playing computer games and talking with friends are slightly similar, like 27% and 26%.

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