Write about the following topic: Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is an unfortunate truth that many
criminals
persist in a life of Use synonyms
crime
after being in jail. Use synonyms
This
is largely Linking Words
due to
an unwillingness of Linking Words
society
to accept ex-convicts, which harms the economy and causes an increase in Use synonyms
crime
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victims
.
Owing to a lack of job opportunities once out of prison, most former prisoners feel insecure Use synonyms
in
their future. Many finish with a prison record which puts off recruitment managers at major corporations who often feel ex-offenders are untrustworthy. Change preposition
about
As a result
, in the United States, almost Linking Words
three quarters
of all ex-inmates turn to Add a hyphen
three-quarters
crime
within five years of leaving prison. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
society
is frequently reluctant to welcome back ex-prisoners. Former Use synonyms
criminals
report difficulty finding apartments to rent or even applying for financial aid to fund their education. Use synonyms
This
causes many to feel that a criminal life is their only option.
Reoffending hurts both the economy and those Linking Words
victims
of Use synonyms
crime
. When former Use synonyms
criminals
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reoffend
, more tax dollars must be spent on re-incarceration, legal fees and maintaining prisoners in jail. As re-offenses continue, budgets for other government programs Correct your spelling
re-offend
such
as education or social services must be cut to make up for increased expenses. Reoffending Linking Words
also
results in more Linking Words
crime
Use synonyms
victims
, many of whom face a lifetime of torment from the trauma created by Use synonyms
crime
. The more Use synonyms
victims
there are, the more pressure that citizens put on governments to maintain a safe Use synonyms
society
which causes more police and overcrowding in prisons which studies show only makes the issue worse.
In conclusion, an uncertain future and hostile Use synonyms
society
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results
in more Change the verb form
result
crime
, more Use synonyms
victims
and more expense to the Use synonyms
tax payer
. Only through changing attitudes will Correct your spelling
taxpayer
criminals
ever be given the chance to have a future and avoid turning back to Use synonyms
crime
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