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The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect based products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.

The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect based products and the current price for certain food available on the market place.
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The provided map illustrates the pieces of data for
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 willingness to consume insect-based meals. Eight regions showed a low proportion of willingness to eat cuisines that contain insects.
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, five other regions around the globe have higher percentages of people
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 are interested in consuming the products compared to those
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 are not interested. Mexico's inhabitants possessed the highest motivation to consume insects-based ingredients with above two-thirds,
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 Japan
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 the most unwilling country to consume them with a share of under a third of the total population. The USA, Russia, India, Australia, Spain, Africa, and the UK stood alongside Japan with a range of 30 per cent to almost half of the citizens' total number.
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, Peru, Brazil, Thailand, and China agreed with Mexico and distributed between 44 per cent to 58 per cent of total willingness.

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