The map below shows the village of Stokefort in 1930 and 2010.

The two maps indicate the comparison between Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. Throughout the 170 years, there are some significant changes have been made in the location. The thing that pops up the most is the green area that has been changed into citizen houses. The farm that used to be a place for the cows

is now become

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now becomes

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solid

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a solid

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buildings

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building

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from the corner of the bridge until the end of the

road

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for

human

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humans

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to live in.

Moreover

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, on the east of Stokeford in 1930 used to have

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a garden

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garden

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gardens

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in

contradictory

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contradiction

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with

retirement

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the retirement

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home

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homes

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for old people in 2010. Some developments

is

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are

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also

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easy to notice.

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, the old primary school used to be smaller

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compared

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with the 2010 primary school which has larger and more sturdy

building

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buildings

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. More than that, the post office that used to stand next to shops now is in the middle of houses. The

road

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route in 1930 was

also

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more simple than

it's

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it was

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in 2010. The

road

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only had one long and a bit curvy line until it approached the river.

On the other hand

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, the

road

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in 2010 has an intersection and turns to connect to

the

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apply

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each

blocks

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block

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.