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the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and opened in one area between 2011 and 2018. summarize the information

the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and opened in one area between 2011 and 2018. summarize the information
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The line graph displays the
number
 of stores that stopped and started business in one district from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, throughout the given
period
, the
number
 of opening shops had a downward trend
while
 the
number
 of closures had a slight drop,
despit
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despite
 a large fall in 2015. The
number
 of stores starting their business had its peak
around
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 8500 at the
begining
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beginning
 of the
period
 in 2011. After a sharp
drop
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 it reached
to
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the half
number
about
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 4000 in 2012.
Then
 it was followed by a two years growth to 6000 in 2014. In 2015, it reached
the
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near its former record in 2012. After maintaining the same level for the next two years, it reached
to
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its lowest value
at the end
 of
period
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. The
number
 of closures started from more than 6000 in 2011.
Then
 until 2014, it fluctuates between around 6000 to 7000. After a dramatic drop in 2015, it touched its lowest record at less than 1000.
However
,
this
 was
follwed
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followed
 by a sharp rise in 2016 to around 5000.
Finally
, it
holded
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 its position
around
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of around
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 5000 by the end
f
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of
period
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the period
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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