the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and opened in one area between 2011 and 2018. summarize the information

The line graph displays the

number

of stores that stopped and started business in one district from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, throughout the given

period

, the

number

of opening shops had a downward trend

while

the

number

of closures had a slight drop,

despit

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despite

a large fall in 2015. The

number

of stores starting their business had its peak

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8500 at the

begining

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beginning

of the

period

in 2011. After a sharp

drop

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it reached

to

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the half

number

about

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4000 in 2012.

Then

it was followed by a two years growth to 6000 in 2014. In 2015, it reached

the

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near its former record in 2012. After maintaining the same level for the next two years, it reached

to

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its lowest value

at the end

of

period

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. The

number

of closures started from more than 6000 in 2011.

Then

until 2014, it fluctuates between around 6000 to 7000. After a dramatic drop in 2015, it touched its lowest record at less than 1000.

However

,

this

was

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followed

by a sharp rise in 2016 to around 5000.

Finally

, it

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its position

around

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5000 by the end

f

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of

period

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.