The diagram below shows how etahnol fuel is produced from corn.
The diagram visually illustrates the process of producing
ethanol
from corn
. Overall
, this
process involves eight steps. First of all, we need to harvest the corn
from the farm. And then
, corn
is collected and stored at the factory.
In the factory, corn
is milled so it will be easier to blend the smaller pieces of corn
with water. Next,
pour some water together with
corn
and cook them for about four hours. After that, this
material needs to be fermented for around 48 hours. Subsequently
, fermented materials will be separated from the solid ones, we just require the liquid. The next step is
purifying the ethanol
, this
step takes five hours of processing.
Once the ethanol
is ready, we store them
on the truck for shipping purposes. Correct pronoun usage
it
Finally
, all ethanol
is delivered in
many gas stations. As you can see on a daily basis, Change preposition
to
this
source of energy can be used for vehicles.Submitted by erniwbs on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn with synonyms.
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