The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The graphic displays the six different variables of educational settings in
percentage
form of female and male
teachers
in the UK in 2010.
Overall
, the number of female
teachers
has decreased steadily in six different
education
institutions, despite
this
the proportion of men taking the role in teaching has increased
along with
the higher
education
status the more male contribution existed. The highest
percentage
of females taking the role of educators is at the nursery or preschool, it has a slight difference with women teaching in primary
school
which almost reaches 100 per
cent
. Meanwhile, the amount of women's contributions to
education
dropped to below sixty per
cent
and above forty per
cent
in three different categories, namely: secondary
school
, college, and private training institutions.
However
, the lowest
percentage
is held by the university category which is approximately only thirty per
cent
in total. Nursery and primary
school
are the only institutions that have the lowest male contributor in
education
just below around twenty per
cent
, before the number rose significantly above 40% for secondary
school
, college, and private training. The
percentage
steadily rose until it was up to around 70% in the university.
Nevertheless
, the total amount of female
teachers
is higher than male
teachers
.
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  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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