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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
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The graphic displays the six different variables of educational settings in
percentage
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 form of female and male
teachers
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 in the UK in 2010.
Overall
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, the number of female
teachers
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 has decreased steadily in six different
education
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 institutions, despite
this
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 the proportion of men taking the role in teaching has increased
along with
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 the higher
education
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 status the more male contribution existed. The highest
percentage
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 of females taking the role of educators is at the nursery or preschool, it has a slight difference with women teaching in primary
school
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 which almost reaches 100 per
cent
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. Meanwhile, the amount of women's contributions to
education
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 dropped to below sixty per
cent
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 and above forty per
cent
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 in three different categories, namely: secondary
school
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, college, and private training institutions.
However
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, the lowest
percentage
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 is held by the university category which is approximately only thirty per
cent
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 in total. Nursery and primary
school
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 are the only institutions that have the lowest male contributor in
education
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 just below around twenty per
cent
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, before the number rose significantly above 40% for secondary
school
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, college, and private training. The
percentage
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 steadily rose until it was up to around 70% in the university.
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, the total amount of female
teachers
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 is higher than male
teachers
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, teachers, education, school, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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