The chart below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003

The chart below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003
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The given pie charts portray the percentage of
energy
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in six different resources in one country between 1985 and 2003. Looking from an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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despite some fluctuations, oil remained the major source of
energy
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in both years. The renewable power source, natural gas, accounted for 13% of the
energy
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produced in 1985,
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experienced an increase to 23% in 2003.
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, power generated from coal was 8% in 1985 and had a slight growth of 14% in 2003. At the beginning of the period, other renewable
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made up 4%, which rose 3% from 1985 to 2003.
On the other hand
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, oil power, which comprised half of producing
energy
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in 1985, fell to 39% in 2003. In 1985, the renewable
energy
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from nuclear sectors was at 22% and decreased by 14% after 18 years.
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,
energy
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from the hydroelectric sector remained constant in both years at 4%.
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