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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the amount of three different book categories that have been sold over 5 years.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
although
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 adult fiction
books
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 lost their interest during
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 timeline, the
sales
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 of children's
books
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 increased significantly.
According to
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 the shape, more than 30
million
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 children's
books
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 were sold in 2002 and it reached more than 40
million
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 in 2003.
Then
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, after a lower positive slope between 2003 and 2005, it rose noticeably in 2006.
Additionally
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, educational book
sales
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 followed the same ascending trend,
whereas
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 it experienced positive and negative fluctuations in 2003 and 2005, respectively. The tendency to
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 group of
books
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 passed adult fiction and recorded almost 32
million
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sales
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.
On the other hand
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, during these 5 years, people's willingness to adult fiction decreased remarkably. People were more interested in
this
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 category in comparison to the other two groups in 2002 with 50
million
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 in
sales
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. In the following years, it reduced to approximately 37
million
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sales
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 and
then
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 it returned to almost 40
million
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 in 2004.
However
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, the descending trend started in 2005 and 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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