Write a letter to the local council to stop the closure of a children’s toy store in your area. In the letter, you should tell: tell him how important the toy store is explain why you don’t want to close it Suggest what advice you want them to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request to stop the closing of
toy
Add an article
a toy
the toy
store
, which is used by local children's for fun prupose
. It is Correct your spelling
purpose
good
shop to buy new and various types of toys on easy access. Please allow me to explain why we need it.
Add an article
a good
This
toy store
is source
of joy for kids. The Add an article
the source
a source
toys
variety is undeniably amazing, Change the noun form
toy
which
is highly famous Correct word choice
and
in
local children. Change preposition
among
Moreover
, you have Correct article usage
a wornderful
wornderful
game setup, where kids like to play and spend their time with their friends. It gives them excitement to come to Correct your spelling
wonderful
store
more often. Correct article usage
the store
This
is small
town, in which your shop is the only one to provide Add an article
a small
latest
version of toys.
I would like to Change the article
the latest
advice
you to keep the Replace the word
advise
store
open, but to increase your revenue you can add different playing stations. These stations which
encourage kids to play more and improve Correct pronoun usage
apply
tehir
physical strength. I would be glad and thankfulCorrect your spelling
their
,
if you take my advice into consideration.
Remove the comma
apply
Thanking
you in advance,
SimranWrong verb form
Thank
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coherence cohesion
Ensure proper development of paragraphs with clear topic sentences and supporting details.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for writing to a council.
task achievement
Check for grammatical accuracy and range of vocabulary.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter is well-structured with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,