Some people think it is letter to travel by cars in the city. Other, however think traveling by bicycles is better. Discuss both views.

Transportation methods have been changing in recent years, as

aresults

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a result

of advanced technology, and increased awareness related to global warming. At that point, some

people

believe

in

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the advantages of travelling by

cars

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car

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outweigh the advantages of

cycking

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cycling

.

This

essay will explain

the

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both perspectives

,

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and highlight the importance of friendly environmental types

og

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of

transportation methods.

According to

some

people

, who advocate the use of

cars

in the

city

,

utulizing

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utilising

cars

would be more useful

instead

of cycling. To clarify, think about a man, who has to carry many books, his computer or other technological gadgets to his workplace.

This

person may face some challenges on the road,

due to

overcrowded

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population

in there.

Furthermore

, his

belonging

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may be stolen by

thief

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thieves

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,

hence

he may lose his fields. In comparison with another worker, who

prefer

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to go

his

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workplace by his car, he does not put himself

at

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in

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this

kind

risky

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position.

Moreover

, since the second figure is able to listen to music in his car far away from

crowded

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atmosphere of

street

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, he is likely to keep his motivation about his job, which may be accepted as an essential

necceties

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niceties

in order to be successful in

bussiness

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business

in the long term.

To sum up

, one should always keep in

minds

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that,

as

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using

cars

in the

city

may promote

people

’s success in business, owing to keep their motivation, and protect themselves from unexpected bad situations like theft. On the other

hands

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, proponents of using

bicyles

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bicycles

bicycle

believe that using bicycles may be

benefitial

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beneficial

for individuals

for

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either

keep

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themselves healthy and

reduce

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reducing

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their

carbon

footprints. Imagine a person who

tend

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to cycle

for reaching

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to reach

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somewhere in the

city

.

This

pattern may bring numerous benefits for him like escaping from

the

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heavy

traffics

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,

is

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which is

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accepted

one

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of the crucial reasons

of

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for

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city

life’s stress.

Furthermore

, since cycling to commute

increase

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the daily active hours,

this

person’s health status may improve, and

also

the risks which come from sedentary life habits, like obesity may be reduced. There is another essential benefit

using

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of using

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bicycles in the

city

with regard

of

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the

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climate change. Since

,

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motorised vehicles are dependent on fuels or gasses, they increase user’s

carbon

footprints.

Hence

operating or taking motorised vehicles contributes to climate change, which is accepted by experts as the most significant affairs in our world. Let’s think about a man who

cycle

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cycles

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in the

city

,

comparison

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with the first figure, he is likely to reduce his bad impact on

environment

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and stay fit. To wrap up, the

tendenceny

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tendency

os

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of

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using bicycles may bring numerous benefits respective of

environment

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the environment

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and personal health status.

Finally

, I personally believe that cycling in daily life should be a habit for everyone. In

this

way,

people

may support their

overall

wellbeing

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with

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healtier

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healthier

lifestyle, and reduce their

carbon

emmisions

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emissions

.

Moreover

, they may escape from the heavy traffic, particularly

in

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rush hours,

they

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are likely to

sıpport

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support

their life of satisfaction.

However

, in order to provide safer cycling experiments,

goverments

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governments

government

should implement laws to keep

themselbes

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themselves

from theft, and

also

invest in cycling paths.

To conclude

, with all these factories

are

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taken into

an

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account,

people

should be benefitted from

cycyling

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cycling

interms

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in terms

of staying fit

,

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and

reducuing

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reducing

their

carbon

footprints. At that point, governments should invest in cycling

pats

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parks

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, and

people

should be supported by

authorites

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authorities

in order to

incentive

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incentivise

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their bicycle usage.