The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart displays the average monthly

rainfall

and temperature of a particular region in East Africa over the course of one year. The

rainfall

is measured in

millimeters

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millimetres

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and demonstrated as a bar graph,

while

the temperature is seen as a line graph. The highest

rainfall

has been recorded in the month of April with approximately 270 mm. With a substantial difference of more than 100 mm,the

second highest

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rainfall

has been

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recorded in November. The region has recorded low

rainfall

in several months, with its lowest in July with just 10mm. The temperatures of the region have ranged between a high of 23.5 degrees in the month of March and a low of 20.5 degrees in the month of July. The temperatures

have risen

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rose

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steadily in the first quarter of the year, after which they

have fallen

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fell

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in the second and first half of the third quarter before sharply rising towards the end of the third quarter. Again after October, the temperatures have fallen towards the end of the year.

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