You have been a living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe why it bothers you Suggest a solution
Dear Mr Sardor,
I hope
this
letter will find you healthy. You do not know me yet.I am a new neighbour in your right hand. I am writing you a complaint about noise.Have you adapted to your home? If so, I am very happy. I think you will like this
city. You organize different parties several times a week.
As long as you are celebrating with your friends because you have moved in.I'm happy with that because you invite me too thank you, but we have 3 girl children at home who still have a little too much to say! You can't hear the music loud so they can't hear it,so please hear the music a little lower than you.I think you understand me and others and believe that you will soon solve problems.
Yours sincerely
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Task Achievement
The task achievement is low, as the letter does not clearly explain the situation, describe why it bothers you in a detailed manner, or suggest a practical solution. Provide clear details and requests to improve.
Coherence and Cohesion
The coherence and cohesion of the letter are weak. Organize your thoughts into clear, logical paragraphs, each containing one main idea. Also, ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader through your letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.