In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside theses vehicles will be passagers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that we are living in a
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world. Fully automated driverless
passanger
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passenger
vehicles will be a reality in
near
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future. In my view,
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benefit of
this
technology will be a revolution in the transport industry and
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are minimal which I will explain in
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To begin
with, a fraction of people
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that driverless passenger vehicle is
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a danger
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danger
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for
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human life. The
techonogy
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technology
can be
manupulated
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manipulated
by experts and cause harm to the public.
In other words
,
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technology behind these automatic
cars
is hacked by any anti-social group will be detrimental.
For example
, the
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terrorists
terrorist
can kill any of their
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by controlling the electronic vehicle system.
Furthermore
,
this
will
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safety of thousands of drivers around the globe.
The corporate
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firms can
easly
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easily
control the transportation industry using
this
innovation.
As a result
,
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drivers'
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jobs might be
cut-off
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which may affect the financial security of the society.
However
, I believe that driverless automobiles have more benefits than
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,
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automatic
cars
will be more convenient and accurate.
These kind
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of
cars
will be controlled by
electronic
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system which will
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to
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control the time schedule more accurately.
In other words
, there will be no human delay in
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passenger vehicle management.
For instance
,
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recent survey in
UK
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the UK
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indicated that the biggest concern about
public
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transportation system is the delay
of
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the service.
Moreover
, the transportation
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will significantly
reduce
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using
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the
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fully automated
cars
. The competition in the industry will increase and that would reduce
price
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and provide better service. In conclusion,
Although
automated vehicles will have safety issues and reduce the
jobs
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are
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concerns, accuracy and cost reduction should be an advantage. In my opinion,
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public convenience is
paramound
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paramount
.
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